Rough Draft

The park has still not responded to me as to whether I can film in their park in the early dusk. Half the time I just end up going to their voice messaging system and the other half the time a person picked up, but wasn't really sure if the rules allowed me at early dusk. But I'm not really worried with the filming location for the time being. Reasons are that I doubt that they won't let me film in the park and that I have a backup if they do deny me entry to film. What I'm worried more about right now is how the story will go in the video.

The basic, rough draft I have for the premise is that two guys go camping in the woods for a short vacation. After they set up their camp for the night they go to sleep, but one of the campers soon finds himself waking up to a loud noise and his friend missing. Realizing that something is up, he makes a dash to his car but a masked figure catches up to him while he's running and is swiftly knocked out by the masked figure. He then wakes up, hands chained to a wall inside a small, sparse room. The rest of the movie after the opening scene would be about him trying to get the masked figure's lair.

I would say it definitely needs work, but that the general concept I have is a solid foundation for building the structure of the story for this video.